I was surprised by one person who felt my pitch was not clear, when all the other commenters felt it was very clear. Of course I received the feedback that I am trying to enter a market that is very saturated, but I feel we will be differentiated enough to stand out.Other than that I received very positive feedback, so I chose to make no changes and tuck with my previous elevator pitch.
Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
I was surprised by one person who felt my pitch was not clear, when all the other commenters felt it was very clear. Of course I received the feedback that I am trying to enter a market that is very saturated, but I feel we will be differentiated enough to stand out.Other than that I received very positive feedback, so I chose to make no changes and tuck with my previous elevator pitch.
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Dear Zoe,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your enthusiasm and your overall approach to your idea. If the naysayers are saying that you weren't clear enough, then this should do to clarify their doubts. Check out my blog: http://camivilla10.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I thought your elevator pitch was awesome and your energy was so positive through out! Your words were very clear and you got your point across. I think you did a great job! You should check mine out. http://principlesofent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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